Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Ventless Comments
Rating: ★3.3
A ventless room of smoke
encased the chair i sat upon,
I ponder through the evening,
Braking into dawn,
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Casey A Geiger
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7/24/2025 5:19:00 PM # 1.0.0
ahh...! what a poem...! applause. 'If my eyes stay open, Will my rest not ever ease, And if my mind stays open, Will my dreams not ever please, And if this life I'm living, Ever drops me to my knees, Will I be forgiven, If I choose to leave' these lines....they have enchanted me.... i'm just again n again readin them... they rhyme flawlessly. i liked the metaphor 'saddened sun' really this poem has really energized me...(it's 2 am now) every word used here is so apt nd suitable and this is a 10 on 10 deservin poem...