Friday, November 7, 2008

Vented Pots Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wanton sirens and Don Juans
Gad around for new heavens
Lures, sneers true contententment
Like a laughing mirage distant
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MSL Anuradha
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Kesav Easwaran 19 November 2008

a well meaning poem...good flow of words...you have deep insight into your write, Anu...10

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Indira Babbellapati 10 November 2008

there z some wry humour i see in this too as in platonists...

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Joseph Poewhit 07 November 2008

The last line comes across well

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