Wednesday, July 23, 2008

Venom Comments

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You speak words which kill,
those which should not be heard,
'I am leaving and might not return, '
words which are venomous.
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Javier Falcon
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May Namoc 24 July 2008

i jope this is not for me either! ! i would never turn my back on u! ! te amo! anywayz, its strong. rly strong and wow. just wow. well, remember. i'm only across the world for like a couple weeks so i'll be back soon enough! and we talk anywayz so no worries right? love you mucho! <3333

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C T Heart 24 July 2008

Oh! ! ! ! ! I could sense hurt and pain in you...what happened to you and May? Hope this is not for her.....it would tear my heart apart.

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OUCHHHHHHHH! ! Hmm. what would you do if i didnt read or comment your poems, i wonder: O This is...like BURNN! ! very strong and taps into how hurt someone leaving could be. The title goes PERFECTLY with this poem, and the title is screaming read me! .<333. ...mills...

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