sunshine's gone, september is on its way
all the leaves are facing decay
my feelings seem to do the same
as i'm alone, whispering your name
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This is a very interesting poem and I recommend it to everyone. The change in mood is quit startling and it was done in one line. This is even more fascinating, as 'Spock' would say. What a poem! GW62
'the facts came through the backdoor, that i don't love you anymore'...fantastic line, it turns everything around wonderfully...great work.
.....................you've made your point loud and clear