Friday, June 6, 2008

Venom Comments

Rating: 4.3

sunshine's gone, september is on its way
all the leaves are facing decay
my feelings seem to do the same
as i'm alone, whispering your name
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COMMENTS
Jerry Hughes 16 November 2008

.....................you've made your point loud and clear

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Greenwolfe 1962 29 June 2008

This is a very interesting poem and I recommend it to everyone. The change in mood is quit startling and it was done in one line. This is even more fascinating, as 'Spock' would say. What a poem! GW62

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Viola Grey 07 June 2008

'the facts came through the backdoor, that i don't love you anymore'...fantastic line, it turns everything around wonderfully...great work.

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Julia Bond 06 June 2008

this is really good (:

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