Saturday, October 7, 2017

Venice Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why has the whole of love come to me suddenly.
I see you with me on the Venice beach
walking hand in hand in the evening
watching the sun go beyond the horizon.
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Ravi Kopra
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Rajnish Manga 12 October 2017

Excellent portrayal of shades of human relationships. Thanks.

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Ravi Kopra 13 October 2017

You're welcome.

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Lamar Cole 08 October 2017

Very nice poem about Venice Beach.

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Ravi Kopra 12 October 2017

thank you, Lamar.

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