Leaving me home alone
Gone to fight for our rights
Promises fill your eyes
Wish to win the fight...
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Vengeance or freedom. Barriers only visible on the outside... choose.
a firm resolve in a tight situation. beautifull and magnanimus. 'let them flow in the sea of hatred vengeance will never be kept in my heart... ' says it all voted10 surya
Your tale is well penned in this wonderful poem. Excellent writing. Karin Anderson
let all the evidences keep in trash let all the accessories vanish in blast let them flow in the sea of hatred vengeance will never be kept in my heart... beautiful imagination from poetess.. let vegeance vanish from the heart.... good write read mine' revenge and missed opportunities
Vengeance is inside us all for we are fragile, weak and small, to rise above into a better place is to see the truth about vengeance. I really enjoyed the journey on this poem well done.
It's quite a wonderful story told. Words form pictures in the minds of people. It conveys some images of poverty and war to me. But then again, I could be misreading. An intelligent, colorful piece feeding people thoughts is masterfully written here. Job well done.
Vengeance this is not any person's, But GOD'S my sweet lady with love in promises that is more delightful and you say it so well kssp on writing
Beautiful writing. This poem is as the good product, produced in prestigious, well prospering Factories. It was worthwhile reading. Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt
A very expressive write, good flow and tells a story, 10 Lynda xx
Super expression. I liked it very much. Its really poetic. Keep on writing.
I like this poem - especially the last line. It has a lot of depth. Fighting for freedom is one thing, fighting to avenge quite another. Leonard
very vibrant and vivacious... brave men never die......history keeps them alive. a reformer, a true humanitarian is sacrificer for the millions... who showed the true meaning of life.........hail! hail! .. i salute u lady grace for having a noble verse..... salu.
its a lovely write on a theme much known in our world with little thought given to it..........Winnnie...i love your way of putting the feel and mood in words...
so great it is to read this poem.... well done dear friend! ! 10..
very well written with a deep concept...and lovely flow...natural
Great poem indeed for vengeance seeds that only can God breed.
Reality has a violence of its own which assaults us and we must figure out how to cope with it. Hopefully, you have found a satisfactory answer with your acceptance “vengeance will never be kept in my heart”. It would be helpful if we could forget and forgive, but forgetting is not something our bodies let us always do. It tends to have ways of reminding us of the unchangeable past. Maybe what you do will help others do the same.