Wednesday, February 21, 2018

Veneration Comments

Rating: 5.0

When this world will turn into ashes
Still our love will smoulder inside the heap of dead,
In that darker days
When air, water and light cease
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Deep Yadav
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 May 2019

LOVELY POEM O ROMANTIC POET BUT IT NEEDS AN EDIT INORDER TO TRANSPORT IT INTO A CLASSIC I could help if you agree I am a POET OF ROMANTIC FREESTYLE POETRY OVER MILLIONS HAVE READ ME (This is only 4 ur information as ur on the stepping stone of Love at the peak of Mount Everest) ((((poet DY NORMALLY I don't make such an offer)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2018

The last stanza is captivating! Loved reading it!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2018

It's a fabulous piece of poetry on love! Your wonderful poetic imagination is fascinating! Wonderful power of creativity! Your style of penning is commendable! Keep it up! I vote this poem with a 10

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