Saturday, July 12, 2008

Vendetta Comments

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As I settle into my seat, seeing you there,
across the table, where once a best friend sat,
now my worst enemy, the person I want to get rid of.
Vigilant to your every move, so I sit here.
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Javier Falcon
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May Namoc 18 July 2008

-hides behind a rock- O.o whoa-hey-hey.... lol. great poem javi. really full of emotion. anger, hate, revenge...scary. lol. but awesome job incorporating those feelings in there. ur amazing!

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daaaanngg! ! i love it, anger and revenge, and i just love it. very in depth of what you would to do that person now that its your turn.. i would NOT want to get in your path when your angry...or hurt.

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
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