Saturday, August 3, 2013

Velvet Lines Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Humming Bird is my pen
It writes syllables on the page
And a poem develops in the womb
Of inspiration from my heart.
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David Wood
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Shahzia Batool 07 August 2013

a poem... from conception to composition...very strong! ! !

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Heather Wilkins 06 August 2013

a true poet is speaking. nice write David

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Danny Draper 05 August 2013

Velvet lines indeed, smooth as an aged single malt.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 August 2013

A poem is inspiration from the heart. Dear poet, your poetry is great. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 04 August 2013

Really beautiful. There was nothing wrong with the other second stanza, but I must say this second stanza does fit the poem much better. A fantastic poem.

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Dave Walker 03 August 2013

A great poem, love the first stanza. A great write.

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