Thursday, March 27, 2014

Velocity Comments

Rating: 4.5

It's velocity
that tears, destroys and ends
lives.
Speeding through ourselves
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Smoky Hoss
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Juan Olivarez 29 April 2014

I can relate. Live fast die young and leave a good looking corpse. Oh rats too late.

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Hans Vr 29 March 2014

Let's take a slow stroll. Agree with Valerie, very good poem

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Dave Walker 27 March 2014

A fantastic poem, speed is addictive in all forms. the world is getting faster and faster.

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Patti Masterman 27 March 2014

I totally get this. Mankind runs after everything but self knowledge. We think everything-the-self is boring, and everything-not-self is new and interesting, when just the opposite is true. Whole worlds open up unto the self when it stops running and delves into its very essence. This is one of the best poems I've found that points this out. Yes it's a little different, but still the same great writing we know and love. :)

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Joseph Anderson 27 March 2014

Different, but I get it. Smoky-you are so right. Just let us slow our pace. Deep and profound thinking.Another great one

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