Veiled Lament Comments

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. A sad story of love nicely put together.

Poignantly heartfelt, loneliness falls like a blanket upon the mind while reading this poem, the sorrow of loss seeps into the picture you have painted through your poem, a lasting image is seen now. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Very well written. A vignette of loneliness and sorrow

A beautifully crafted very touching poem highlighting the deep sorrow after losing a near and dear one that accompanies one through out life. Thanks for sharing.10 points.