Veiled Departure Comments
I sense the last gulp of air
Letting down a fallen bird
Dislodging itself in measured ways
Just as solemn promises did
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hmmmm... very delightful to read..... thanks....
Amazingly beautiful poem, , rich in thought and well chosen words, , i am impressed by the simple eloquence in thses lines 10
Your word structure is wonderful... a really good read - thank you 10/10
Beautifully created write, you're visuals explode out of this poem.. A fine piece..thanks for sharing. all the best Jon
Filled with beautiful and delicate imagery... thank you! It is a delight. Frank
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7/26/2025 5:35:20 PM # 1.0.0
A sublime start with a nice poem, Noor. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.