Veiled Departure Comments

A sublime start with a nice poem, Noor. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

a sweet and intersting poem..liked it much

hmmmm... very delightful to read..... thanks....

Amazingly beautiful poem, , rich in thought and well chosen words, , i am impressed by the simple eloquence in thses lines 10

Your word structure is wonderful... a really good read - thank you 10/10

i love it it is expressive

Beautifully created write, you're visuals explode out of this poem.. A fine piece..thanks for sharing. all the best Jon

Filled with beautiful and delicate imagery... thank you! It is a delight. Frank