Saturday, July 4, 2009

Veil Of Life Comments

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The curtain so soft
Move like a ghost at night
Maybe he is right
To be ghost
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Amir Foroughi
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Santosh Sharma 27 April 2011

A wondreful feeling on the veil of life, the life is experiencing so many modes again and again and the morning is vanishing all shadows and dark.

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Sofia Darling 27 April 2011

wow another beautiful poem! :) so much imagery and has a lot of feeling, i like itt.

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Ejaz Khan 04 July 2009

A nice thought, a good write!

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 04 July 2009

So all noises Forest of shadows and again me No remorse No whisper The curtain and the me So meaningful words, well penned...

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