Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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Rating: 4.6

Let my life unfold the greatest story of time
Let my love be the sweetest poem
See me burn
Watch me die in the arms of love
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 December 2022

A brilliant poem! Appreciated and admired the candid poetic expression....majestic and powerful. Top marks!

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Saadat Tahir 28 March 2017

potent and yet delicate...it seems a the writer is struggling with a dilemma...trying to escape the existential confines and set the soul free.. well written liked

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Abhilasha Bhatt 23 December 2016

Love can Heal the burn.....loved it :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 December 2016

Yes, Aarzoo, Let this world witness the power of love. Very emotional. Very heart-warming! And invoking the God of Love!

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 December 2016

Undying Love! ! Thanks for sharisharing this poem with us.

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Aarzoo Mehek 13 December 2016

Tons of prayers for reading each n every poem instigating me to write more.

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 December 2016

Hi Aarzoo, A new poem from you after many weeks; thrilled. Let my love be the sweetest poem- Love is the sweetest poem. No doubt. Let me earn The inexplicable moments Of undying love This is heartfelt love of every loving heart. Great poem. Loved reading.10+

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Aarzoo Mehek 13 December 2016

Thank you so much for all the lovely feedback and appreciating my little work and thanks for reminding me of my absence from PH. Bless you for being caring soul.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 December 2016

Watch me die in the arms of love....what a powerful n intense write this is. Love is the strongest emotion known to man n how beautifully u have depicted love through your enchanting poetry. Totally mesmerizing. A beautiful way to put feelings. And let the world witness the power of Aarzoo's words. A super 10.

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Aarzoo Mehek 13 December 2016

Love speaks volumes and I tried capturing it in few simple words. Thank you Nosheen for being a part of this poetical journey.

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