Sunday, January 28, 2018

Veil Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fake face and fake smile
Hard to change their style
Eyes can see who you are
Still try to act like a star
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Rini Shibu
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Paresh Chakra 07 December 2018

Veil is a very gorgeous poem

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Robert Murray Smith 08 May 2018

Lifting the veil we see the true feelings inside.+++10 Robert

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 January 2018

Eyes can see who are! ! Yes! A child is known of his or her doings. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 30 January 2018

Thanks Edward ! ! !

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Yiyan Han 29 January 2018

This is a sensitive topic But you express it in a kind way...well done!

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thanks Yiyan! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 29 January 2018

Your poems are annoyingly good.Damn, I'm jealous!

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thanks Kostas! !

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Practicing Poetess 28 January 2018

A smile is something that is easily perceived as being genuine or fake. Good job, Rini!

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thanks poetess! ! !

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Lamar Cole 28 January 2018

This is a very wonderful poem. I enjoyed it so much I had to read it several times.

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thanks a lot Lamar! ! !

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Nudershada Cabanes 28 January 2018

Fakeness is revealed sooner or later. A wisely penned thought Rini.10 Nuder

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thanks Nuder..!

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Savita Tyagi 28 January 2018

Lovely thoughts poured in poem. The fake is so pervasive, veils everything.

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thank you so much savita! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 January 2018

Rini, such an interesting write...10++++

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thanks Bernard for your comment! ! ! !

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