Vaulting Memories... Comments

Wow, so many poet friends who care deeply about you. I hope your heart is Dancing in style and floating high, Vaulting into the vast azurine sky... among the beauty and grace of many other poets and friends.

I don't remember if I have already commented on this nor have I patience to check through the comments down but I have pleasure in addressing you 'the wisdom-poet'...yes, you are

Great poem and nobody had trouble recognizing it as such, I see. Love your description of memories flying into the vault of mind.

hy dude...yu got me drownd in ma memories while readin this poem....great work...........realistic n creative works are alwys been n ur style......behold my aging eyes a bunch of kites..............lovely line.........admired a lot..i gve yu 10+++ fr this one.......sebastine

i really dont know how to comment about such an awsome poem........i am out of words

Your words make me dance, Kes, as I read them well laid out in rhythm and beat. Oh, so simple, so fresh, You show us so clearly that the little things, the ordinary things of everyday are sublime. Let me read you again and dance one more time... mark

Just awesome! you have excelled once again in bringing out the wonderful memories that are actually the 'Life Line' for most of us. Thanks for sharing. A 10

kesav jee! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..boy have i missed your soft melodious verses....this one was such a great one to restart with....excellent...excellent...you just soar with the kites!

ROCKING THE WHOLE PLACE WITH INNOCENT MIGHT- Kesav this beautiful, graphic line captures the joy, laughter, shrieks- it cojures so many memories in my mind. today i have read it again and i am delighted, feeling nostalgic.i had posted a comment earlier also. any way i always discover new insights in your work each time i read it. thanks. how much i wanted to fly a kite on Basant Panchami... 10 Mamta

kites and vaulting memories always my favourite :)

it is about me childhood days kesav hi i used to fly kites and kites and kites up when they dot the ski in colours different we frolicked and frenzied as if we were heroes it sounds as if you had a childhood the way i had vast paddy fields after harvest scores of chldren from the neighbourhoods summer vacation or some other vacation it was kites all the way up in hte sky

you're really talented poets, great work kesav....thank u for sharing my friend..

Kesav, you paint a beautiful picture, memory allows us the luxury of having visited a moment in time, we can have mind paintings of it, for all of time. Bob

This is very good, it's a complex idea shaped with few words. That's not something that's easy to do, good job.

nice piece.. love it..

Good write sentimental and warm thanks

Delightful memories, your poem is a delight. It is so wonderful to have such childhood memories and watching children at play often brings back that carefree feeling for me also. A feel good poem...10

Short and sweet! Thoroughly enjoyable! A 10 indeed!

:) I really enjoyed it!

keshavji, i felt like reading a great screenplay........ kites dancing right in front of my eyes........... lovely piece.......lovely....... a real poem shows her beauty before understanding even a single word.......