Vascular Landscape Poem by TheLone Walker

Vascular Landscape

Rating: 3.5

Something
has broken


the see through glass
landed
shards and opaque
its vascular landscape

feels heavy
way more than it ever felt

now it hurts
being with you

for not knowing
knowing not
nothing

sledgehammer to the mirror
much more than a whole
of the smashed view
a kaleidoscope to look through the perspectives
that lead to the impact

unannounced.

yes dear
it is
ok
.

Sunday, June 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,moving on,nature,philosophical ,truth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Marvelous piece, which gives me the image of a fallen broken glass which is unrepaired. Please check my poem " Angel" thanks

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Chinedu Dike 02 June 2019

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. A well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing.

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marvelous start, this gives me the image of an unrepaired glass.Please check “Angel“ by me. thanks

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wonderful piece, it gives me the image of a broken glass which is unrepaired. Check “Angel“ by me.

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