Saturday, June 3, 2006

Variations Comments

Rating: 5.0

Five people at a club,
One a compulsive drinker.
Sitting at the bar twenty four seven,
Never moving form the seat,
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Mathew Lewis
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Nick Percowycz 04 June 2006

This is a terrific poem! We use all sorts of ways to 'fit in'. But all the while we live on the edge. Congrads on a great poem, Mathew. There are no variations to the 10 I have given you!

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