Monday, September 21, 2020

Variations On A Theme... Comments

Rating: 5.0

When writing variations on a theme,
Perhaps great things arise.
Hidden truths are finally revealed,
To administer vast surprise.
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Shaun Cronick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 September 2020

A wonderful and insightful poem, Shaun. When we use different strokes and try new ones, we could discover some things that will improve our craft. " Nothing to lose but all to gain." A pragmatic thought. Beautifully written.

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Dominic Windram 22 September 2020

Excellent poem Shaun...I particularly like the closing lines, ' New light through poetry windows/ Shining on what's composed.' It's definitetly a final revelation inspired full score of five from me!

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