Variation Comments

plenty of variation here. i'm blue eyed and Nordic, I think.

It's cute. Good to know poetry's put to good use :)

variation is beautiful! memang cantik dan bagus!

this is beautiful and lovely i have noticed the depth of the meaning and now i feel satisfied. Well done

Dear Ruth, please listen to Micheal Round as I totally agreed with what he said.

Certainly different - a variation to the usual type of poetry.

I like your poems. Instead of the dark stuff one usually reads yours are bright and light. May I suggest you tighten up on the use of i rather than I. Use that's rather than thats - which of course is wrong. These small quasi gramatical errors take away from the value of the poem.

IM VERY SORRY ABOUT THE SPELLING MISTAKES

IM SO SORRY ABOUT THE SPELLING MISTAKE.HOPE YOU GET IT