Saturday, June 20, 2020

Vanquished, But.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Doors threw open
People, like butterflies
just out of silken cocoons
Looked fresh 'n cool, but inexact
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Hey! .. Please keep out of my way, and leave me alone I got to earn a meal today for my starving kids. Covid 19 has brought great amount of fear and suffering all over the world. To be free from this deadly disease has become the first and foremost priority. Let us pray that we will emerge out of this terrible situation at the earliest......Thank you Jayatissa for reading my poem.......10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2020

Sirens on road, hasten heart beat With masks on, people seem abnormal....Time of Corona virus has created the fearful situation. The scene is witnessed. We have to maintain social distancing. There is no other option. The way will be kept for you in safety and security. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned for social awareness.

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Thank you Kumar for your encouraging comment. Please stay blessed.

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I got.......starving kids.Fresh and very beautiful.10+++++

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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