Vanity Vs. Personality Comments

This poem was worded amazingly! The imagery was very clear, and it really added to the idea you convey... Vanity vs Personality is a clever title too. I see that many times vanity becomes a prominent trait in those who have it, getting consumed and snobby. Great job! : 3

So wise April, we all I'm sure have met people like that! ! So enjoyable to read!

If only everyone realised this...ah well. Its a rich poem. It reminds me of Goblin Market

Meaningful good poem. I liked it!

Beautiful write April. Keep it up