Wednesday, September 30, 2020

Vanity Comments

Rating: 4.8

She loves her beauty
Displays it like a peacock
With its bright plumage.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Timber Koleden 26 June 2025

A masterful Haiku with great insight! Beauty is in the heart and not on the skin indeed!

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Nabakishore Dash 09 April 2022

A great simile madam very befitting.

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Yiyan Han 31 October 2020

beauty has its universal appeal and is colour blind

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 October 2020

A wonderful poem that provides oblique reference to the value of natural beauty! Beautifully put...Top 🌟

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Akhtar Jawad 25 October 2020

Poetry is the art of nature, it's beauty that admires it's own appearance and when it is admired by others it becomes love. Rose Marie Juan Austin has mastery in writing short poems.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 October 2020

To MyPoemList. Thank you so much for sharing this gorgeous poem.

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Shaun Cronick 09 October 2020

So worthy of another read and another worthy five stars. Thank you again Rose Marie for sharing your poetry gift. Take care and keep writing poetry magic, for I'll keep reading. Thanks again Rose Marie and I wish you and the loved around you, all the good virtues this life and poetry can bestow.

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2020

Yes one should take pride in what is been given by Almighty without being arrogant. Fantastic three lines.10****

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 October 2020

She loves her beauty Displays it like a peacock With its bright plumage.......great expressed; sometimes it seems to look gorgeous the vanity; yeah we know- empty vessel sounds much; Empty vessels make the most noise! great write the senryu like a proverb ///

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 October 2020

Vanity upon vanity! ! Exposing her beauty to the eyes of the public. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 02 October 2020

With its bright plumage.........fine piece........thank u..........anjandev roy.

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Anjandev Roy 02 October 2020

With its bright plumage......meaningful.....thank u....anjandev roy.

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 October 2020

Short and sweet one. Loved it. Thanks for sharing such a cute poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 October 2020

A well inked poem. Truly pretty....5 stars*****

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Khairul Ahsan 30 September 2020

Oh so wonderful! Beauty is meant to be displayed, would you still like to call it a vanity?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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