Vanishing Point Comments

perceptive about perspective

Jesse, Enjoyed this poem very much. Indeed we cannot trust our eyes they are great deceivers. Well done. Carol

I thought surely you were going to use the converging and disappearing thing as a terrific metaphor, and you sort of do at the end. Not bad, Jesse. I think you spent a little too much time on restating the literal aspects of perspective and almost no time on what could be the more interesting metaphoric aspects. But I kinda like the poem.