Monday, November 16, 2009

Vanishing Lights Comments

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Day passes
desires dwindle
rays of light ceases
eyes seek the glasses
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Sandra Martyres 17 November 2009

There is a certain poignancy to this poem that cannot escape the reader...nicely written Lalitha..

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Rakesh Bedi 17 November 2009

....that all the light at twilight/end up into nothing to sight....brilliant, lalitha; provided i understood it correctly...i think you are talking of birth(twilight) and death(nothing to sight) ...correct, dear? ? ?

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