Vanishing In Thin Air. Comments

Now, things move and move andI would be no more At any moment, vanishing in thin air! ! ..fine /

A lovely poem..Thanks for sharing

A witty philosophical reflection written with conviction. An insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Very impressive write, Ponniah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Reading it again as the PoD I feel you very well deserve the positioning. Congratulations Ponniah.

A well crafted poem with touching sentiments experienced by a lonely senior citizen. Congrats on member poem of the Day.

A seventy year old senior colleague of mine who has lost his wife recently, confided in me, 'nobody comes to a lonely old man, except the mosquitoes'. This poem, however poignant, touches the readers. Congratulations to the poet on his poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

'When I was a child I was not aware of the things What would I be At the evening part of my life, Or of caring for death' - Life, methinks, has a beauty in each stage, dawn to twilight. Even a man at the doors of death may have something to look at and revel in.

A well crafted moving poem... Congrats, sir Ponniah for being chosen....10++++++++++

congrats on poem of the day and a fine written poem

A powerful write of the realisation of life's end.

A poignant write about old age and its negligence by kiths and kins. As the man gets older he becomes a burden for the family and waits for his death with vacant eyes. Touching poem. Thanks for sharing and congrats.

The poet contemplates about death, strangely comparing it to motion which somehow makes him evaporate. Also how he never knew what death would be like when he was older. Now he is older.

" When nobody cares for me" ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A vivid portrayal of the anguish about old age ufferings and death. commendable

round to round moving and moving vanishing to air............../// wonderful poetic expression

drops of water on a hot beach, as if, changing in to vapor.... heat breaking words....

Now, things move and move andI would be no more At any moment, vanishing in thin air...heart broken lines: (

Superb in its expression and profound in its content. Life brings so much variety from beginning to the end- from moments of joy to the moments of excruciating pain related with disease and old age. Thanks & Congrats. To MyPoemList.

I have come to a stage When everything I feel Come to a stand still. no one wants me. loneliness and the thinking of death. finely written.. thank u dear poet. tony