Vanishing Eyes Comments

Passion, intensity of love at a higher level of human understanding.Well written..Cristina Teodor

i really like everythign about this poem, its beautiful in its own way. its so deep, and has a lot of meaning, i am impressed, realllyy :)

Oh yes, a 10 definitely from me....in gratitude.: -) Ruth

I touched the beauty That was torn in me.... These, among other lines in this poem (well in fact the entire poem) is powerfully composed, regular and yet full of extreme passion and sadness. I wonder at the intensity of your emotions here and yet, you do create an atmosphere of reality. Many people feel this sadness although there seems to be an added dimension to yours. Wonderful poem Amir, Wonderful! ! : -) Thank you for sharing... Ruth Lavelle

So long dark nights I had With you in joy or sad Kissing the land of myths Rising the soddomies of love... intense love in writing of poems.. god write.... read mine dead nights and miss i miss u and mary to marry..cpmment

Very good.................................................