Saturday, April 22, 2017

Vanished Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

a fateful shadow haunts the night
within my restless sleep
your vanished spirit still remains
in memories that I keep
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 24 April 2017

Beautiful. The memory of sweet romance lives on, it's beyond the curse of age. It's as fresh in mind as though it happened only yesterday. Deep write. A10

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Barry Middleton 24 April 2017

Thanks. I think I may have written this poem as many was as it can be written.

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Annette Aitken 23 April 2017

Oh my! what another beautiful write Barry The visuals and words flow with ease simply a lovely read. Annette

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Barry Middleton 23 April 2017

Thank you so much Annette.

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