Thursday, July 30, 2009

Vanished Love Comments

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My dreams are shattered
My hopes are diminished
My heart has been battered
And love has vanished.
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Vikram Aarella - The Poem Shooter
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....Search for the misplaced as it is not lost.Find solace in the pursuit of the much treasured.Good poem catching the eyes and obviously the mind...

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Shirley Woods 06 August 2009

Good poem - full of feelings of hurt. Well written.

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Obinna Eruchie 04 August 2009

Well written piece about being shattered by love.

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Ted M 31 July 2009

When smitten with love, this is all you can feel or think about and without this there's no driver. well written.

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Jay P. Narain 30 July 2009

Nice rhythmic poem. You will rise like a phoenix!

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