Tuesday, October 10, 2017

Vanished Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

Like a fake cloud that promises an unfelling rain
So she promised me love
Saying now she has forgotten about such vow
Oh love, I wish you were a river to keep on flowing without stop
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Julius Saidu
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Julius S. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

Like fake clouds come and give promises of rain and do not give, false love seems to break hope and heart is so sad. Day turns and memory remains...10

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Julius Saidu

Julius Saidu

Kajuru Kaduna state
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