Friday, September 14, 2012

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The traces of life haven't completely left me yet, but they soon will vanish.
The pain is still there…the hurt still evident.
I don't know how I became a stoic figure of life, but here I am
Life has tramped me in the dirt along with you.
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Brianna N R Wine
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Fabrizio Frosini 06 December 2014

let life trample me instead of you... life's has got heavy feet, for sure.. nice lines

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Kelly Seale 15 September 2012

wow, this is so deep, so personal... :) your emotins show through to the very core of your heart, your pain at such a lose. I'm impressed! Graet Write Brianna! ; -) -Kelly.

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