Tuesday, April 14, 2009

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I fail to see the trick
How can I stand when you keep pushing me?
There’s nothing wrong but there’s nothing right
I laugh my a** off (lmao)
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Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl
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Kevin Carney 31 July 2010

I really like the way you write. Really nice write and I love the way you just don't stick to the usual form with your use of txt for you and your. Keep writing ;)

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Jaclyn Derhammer 17 April 2009

youu are awsome at poetry we should chat sometime

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Gracie Sprouse 14 April 2009

The key to getting outta that cell is in your heart dear. You found it by now right? Good writing.

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