Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Vanish Comments

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horrified from fear
whispered voices in your ear
cold and lonsome you stand and wait
for your long and painful fate
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Carrie Sprouse
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Silence Dogood 12 October 2008

Not bad but you repeated the same rhymes which made it less enjoyable

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Carrie Sprouse

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