Vampires Invitation Comments

'We will hide from the sun that you need no more'. I luv the words in this poem. You have written this so well that the imortal is believable. Stunningly sensuous and gripped me from beginning to end.

I really like this poem but I do love vampires. I have tried a few times to write about vampires but they never turn out this good. Nice job!

i like.........very passionate and seductive. but very scary. well done