Thursday, January 3, 2008

Vampire Lover Comments

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Vampire Lover
By, Demon

My wings are broken,
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Demon Elwin
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Wandering Scarlet 28 September 2008

its like u say ur a vampire then ur not, but are talking about a vampire.....maybe like......schitzophrenia or sumthinnnn

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I feel sorry for the immortal vampire-should I feel that way about my mortality-who wins when they want to be someone else.

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Greenwolfe 1962 31 August 2008

This was more direct and clear. GW62

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Vampire Heart 31 August 2008

Very lovely, love the vampiric melancholy used in the poem, nice, keep up the good work

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