Saturday, April 12, 2008

Vampire Love Comments

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He pokes her, she pokes him back
she tickles him, He tickles her back
He tickles her better, she laughs really, really hard. She bites him really, really hard. He blinks then screams, and then writhes in pain.
She kisses his neck really slowly where she bit him at. They love one another.
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Tyler Tillett
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woah that is too cute. i like it. but try to not make it so sentence like, if you know what I mean. but very well written i like it alot.

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