Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Vampire Love Comments

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The blood trickling down my neck feels good.

The vampire that bit me lies at my feet,
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Crenshaw Happytime
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Chinedu Dike 05 October 2019

An interesting story written in persuasive expression with conviction. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Crenshaw.

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Crayon Poet 28 September 2019

Lean and cold, yet rich... I hope there are more lines where these haunting ones came from.

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Happytime. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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