Lustful whispers in midnight dreams,
Upon satin bed under moonlight gleam,
Restless figures begun to undress,
Fingertips and torsos meet to caress,
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yikes! .....sounds like ur a little too into halloween.....well in my opinion i would just retire from poem hunter after posting that one.....poems represent feeling and emotion....not which halloween character u want to have to have babies with......ill give this one a negative 12
God this is so tasty Like a piece of cake after a dinner that didn't fill you up LUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVIn it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! greatest poem so far one of my favorites
you did it well, hope you will submit more...you got a very interesting work on your ages...keep on penning.
ok i'll admit that your a very talented writer. i know see what you mean by vocabulary. very nice. but i still like simple poems, very simple.
I really enjoyed the poem and I thought I'd say that even if you don't care. Sometimes it's nice to be complimented.
That is a really good poem if you don't mind me saying! The imagery is great! nice work, i also liked the format and how the words flow. 'A true poet makes the words flow, as for those who are not true leave the words a mesh of letters' ~Beth
a vampire desire you wish such tederness can be a sin write more of your vampire love and you may meet sweet bliss