Vampire Comments

re·morse ri'môrs/ noun noun: remorse deep regret or guilt for a wrong committed. they were filled with remorse and shame synonyms: contrition, deep regret, repentance, penitence, guilt, compunction, remorsefulness, ruefulness, contriteness; pangs of conscience, self-condemnation, self-reproach; guilt complex [example: bri edwards has lots of REMORSE for all the bad things he's done in his life.] FELICIA, like horse, NOT like course. like Morse Code (i think) . how difficult spelling can be! ! ! i have problems as well. and THEN there are the speakers and spellers in u.k. and other british commentwealth nations. yikes! ! ! this reminds me that i want to write about a vampire going into a blood bank. i DID write one like that in a guests comments book inside a local bloodmobile, but i didn't copy it for my records. that sucks! get it? sucks? hee-hee. The vampire that feeds on me, Is corrupt, evil, and full of greed, ...... i like this. but, IF you wanted to make a rhyme out of it, just change the first line to The vampire that on me does feed, i'm not sure which version i like more...yours or mine. :) your second stanza is my favorite. it may not be my favorite poem, but it IS my favorite vampire poem i've seen on PH. how is that for a slippery compliment? thanks for sharing. maybe i should read more of yours now, because i think you might delete them all someday; i think you did that at least once. but i'm busy and, besides, i don't know that you will delete them, or if you will submit more, and i may want to see one in the future which i haven't read. :) bri i usually don't return so soon to read another of a poet's poems, but since you said in your recent message to me that you always appreciate my comments, i could NOT resist! I TRIED.