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It's a wonderful poem! 'Flew all over the vast fields, where we saw the fruits and nuts, Collected the hays to build the nest in the high trees, Away from the predators who could crawl and steal, Away from the robbers who could drill and retrieve, ' - These lines are simply superb! The last line shatters the dream like imagery. In my poems too, often and on birds and nests find a place, as if naturally.