Thursday, August 23, 2018

Value Of My Heart Comments

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Value of my heart

Let me swim in your love and drown in the depths of your arms
And as I pick up my head I see the beauty that surrounds me.
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Practicing Poetess 25 August 2018

A lovely, melodic poem clearly evoking love! And, I can plainly see why it also caught the Captain's eye: swim, depths, ocean, oyster, pearl! Thank you for posting this gem.

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Captain Cur 23 August 2018

A beautiful love poem about the quality of love itself, to find value and fulfillment in the arms of that which and whom we love.

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louis rams 23 August 2018

thank you for that comment

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