Value Of Loss Comments

demise always remember us our leaving the earth one day.....our hold going to be relieved...... demise of some close one`s always put us in grief..... your poem clearly a tribute and in plain words....

This poem is nicely written even though emotions are of sadness. Still remembering things which are in ones memories is a way life teaches.

loss and grief teach us valuable lessons life is brief so build bridges and not walls Vidi, its a very moving piece of writing, at times like this we feel helpless, best is to give space and listen when the other person is ready to share