Tuesday, August 1, 2017

Value Is Heavier Than That Comments

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There are so many commodities
Different kinds in shape and size
And in length, breadth or weight
But everythings are useful.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 July 2020

Values! ! Virtues! Righteous morals better than anything. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pushpendra Patel 03 March 2019

Values are necessary for life always. Greatest love comes from God through light into Earth. We feel this. This is really great when love is transformed into light of love of wisdom. Love glows and grows with us. This is a great write and you are a nice poet.

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Pushpendra Patel 03 March 2019

Values are very much necessary for us. Greatest love comes from God through light into Earth. We feel this. This is really great when love is transformed into light of love of wisdom. Love glows and grows with us. This is a great write and you are a nice poet.

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Ruth Walters 01 July 2018

aesthetic means appreciation so I think, perhaps, you might alter this line to 'and is innovative' but I like the sentiment of this poem for we seem to live in a 'throw away' society these days....when I was a child you had to make things last, everything was held as precious. My mother's kettle lasted until I left home, so at least 23 years :)

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Michael Walker 01 August 2017

You discern in a subtle way how much commodities are different from values, even though we need both of them for everyday life. I notice that nearly all your poems end on the concentric road to God. You must have unshakable faith in God.

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Douglas Scotney 01 August 2017

a thoughtful poem K.M, and I suppose true.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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