I saw you in that bottle.
The more I looked
the more I drank
the more you stripped
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...he was spurred by envy, Jake. It's an old story. Good for poetry. Fortunately.
Thank you Sandra, for you vote of confidence, but please give either 10 or nothing. A seven doesn't inspire me to write any new poems. Lizzie: I love the word luscious and thank you for your comments with greetings of the same name. H
Such luscious use of words... this one would be great to read aloud.
Really accross the map herbert, but I like to see that you are trying new structures and forms. You are so very talented, do not believe any who say you are not. You are.
Subtlety, I love it. And wit. No worries about caput maximus. Too late already. H