Sunday, October 14, 2007
Valley Of Tears Comments
Rating: ★4.8
Beyond the gaze there is a time zone
of rumored agitation
when you cannot sleep.
You open your eyes quietly to complain.
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Goldy Locks
14 October 2007
daring punctuation. i love it. your closing lines could be a little stronger, unless you're going for a reference/indication to the title. `where centuries throw the dust on your hallowed gifts.' excellent placement... ~~sjg
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8/2/2025 3:55:38 PM # 1.0.0
Thank you for sharing such beautiful work. Keep writing!