Friday, July 22, 2011

Valley Of Illusions Comments

Rating: 4.8

It was a lonely ride on a holiday
To the valley in the woods nearby
Just for some moments of solitude
To calm the mind's tide
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Christy' Fernandez 18 July 2022

What a beautiful poem! Perfectly written with beautiful rhyme scheme. Picturesque presentation and enchanting narration.

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Dr. Henry 06 March 2022

A classic poem with picturesque narration. The rhythm the images are all beautiful and exquisite. A world class poem

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 August 2017

Fantastic. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Roseann Shawiak 30 July 2015

Sometimes we seem to be dreaming of something, it seems real, yet we don't believe we saw it. Then suddenly there is a tangible reminder of it having been there. Eerie at times. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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