Tuesday, July 10, 2007

Validating My Erections Comments

Rating: 4.4

Seeking any form of validation from the readership
I tend to write on provocative topics, inspired by Fluff Girls
and the early morning hard on I get viewing them
when they flap their collagen injected and painted lips
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Ted Sheridan
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Elysabeth Faslund 10 July 2007

This is one funneeee poem! Validation is so hard...to believe, read, and keep as an upstanding pillar of society. Hell with what 'she' will think. Commentary is just that. You certainly didn't need a dictionary for this one! ! ! Now, poor 'Bob', on the other hand...Great! Get validated! ! ! xxElysabeth

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Gregory Collins 10 July 2007

i think i am going to have to start, wonder what she will think? thanks

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Ted, the title reeled me in and boy was I glad to have been caught! This is a remarkably well written, astute, and courageous poem. Of course, I'd expect nothing less than the best from you! Bravo, my friend.

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Bollocks. There you go, some all-round validation. :) t x

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