Sunday, July 23, 2017

Valiant Fight Comments

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V-aliant fight for the faith
I-s needed to beat the devil;
V-ictory over the enemy
I-s eliminating the peril.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Jeanette Telusma 23 July 2017

...L-et the lies of darkness fade, as you uphold the valiant fight. Such a wonderful acrostic poem and one of great truth. The last line closed it very well. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks, Jeanette....nowadays the deceiver is roaming and roaring like a lion. The devil sows lies so he can devour his victim... So we need a valiant fight... A big like to your comment....👍

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Bernard F. Asuncion

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