Saturday, October 17, 2009

Valerian Pills, Make Stressfull Situations Much Easier! Comments

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You're weeping, not helping
Why do you want to be the first one to get to the bottom, everytime
I'm shaking, you're aching
It seems you always want eyes and ears
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Deodath Debideen 17 October 2009

Valerian does calm things down. The header attracted me, then I saw the turmoil within! Great job!

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Tai Chi Italy 17 October 2009

I do like this poem very much! A great read. Smothering our emotions with pills won't kill them off, as we find out eventually...love will not be smothered, just subdued for a while. I like the sound of your last stanza! It shows strength of character, because you know what you are made of...ie love, which can reset every tribulation and trial we have ever endured. This fact is why we don't need a compass to find our way...we feel our way perfectly well. Love the effect of those two last lines on the whole piece. I am sure the wind knows what way to take you. We have to go with the flow because every day is different from the last and being flexible, is safer imo. Smiling at you talking too much! Tai

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