Wednesday, February 13, 2008

Valentines Gift Comments

Rating: 5.0

I bought you just one white rose
with velvet petals and such sweet scent
as flowers may in full blooming hold,
with a blush of pink, not shy or bashful
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David Taylor
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Ernestine Northover 14 February 2008

Scatter ye petals while ye may, for love can be afleeting. Lovely write David, and yes, a rose does mean so much more, especially on Valentine's Day, and white is lovely and means purity. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Mary Gordley 13 February 2008

One perfect poem to place along side that one perfect rose. Thanks David.

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Lynda Robson 13 February 2008

I agree with Duncan, a lovely write David, Best wishes Lynda xx

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Duncan Wyllie 13 February 2008

This is very much worth the read, what a brilliantly structured and detailed poem of excellence, , , thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X

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David Taylor

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